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  那位英语高手,帮我改一下自己写的六级作文PartI:Writing(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln'sfamousremark,"Givemesi

  那位英语高手,帮我改一下自己写的六级作文

  PartI:Writing(30minutes)

  Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutes

  towriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln'sfamousremark,"Givemesixhours

  tochopdownatree,andIwillspend,thefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe."

  Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.

  Thewaytosuccess

  Thereareafamousremark”Give

  mesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspend,thefirstfoursharpening

  theaxe”.Itisveryofimportancefor

  ustogetpreparation,though

  sometimesitwilltakemuchtime.Ifthepreparationisnotenough,wemayspenddoubletimeto

  dothesameworkwhichtheotheronedo.

  Obviously,it’sakeyofsuccess.Gettingpreparationisasmartway.Admittedly,

  Onethingcanbefinishedisbasedonhardworking.Butwhenthereisawaycan

  makeworkingmoreefficient,weshouldadoptedit.Justworkinghardisnotalways

  resultinsuccess.Successpersonalwaystrydifferent

  waystofinishthework.It’sthekeyofsuccess.

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2020-01-21 12:11
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李孝明

  Thewaytosuccess

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  waystofinishthework.It’sthekey【of改为to】success.

2020-01-21 12:13:34
林嘉宜

  太感谢你了以后还能不能求教你呢

2020-01-21 12:14:52
李孝明

  Noproblem

2020-01-21 12:17:40

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