那位英语高手,帮我改一下自己写的六级作文PartI：Writing(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln'sfamousremark,"Givemesi
那位英语高手,帮我改一下自己写的六级作文
PartI：Writing(30minutes)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutes
towriteashortessayentitledTheWaytoSuccessbycommentingonAbrahamLincoln'sfamousremark,"Givemesixhours
tochopdownatree,andIwillspend,thefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe."
Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsbutnomorethan200words.
Thewaytosuccess
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mesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspend,thefirstfoursharpening
theaxe”.Itisveryofimportancefor
ustogetpreparation,though
sometimesitwilltakemuchtime.Ifthepreparationisnotenough,wemayspenddoubletimeto
dothesameworkwhichtheotheronedo.
Obviously,it’sakeyofsuccess.Gettingpreparationisasmartway.Admittedly,
Onethingcanbefinishedisbasedonhardworking.Butwhenthereisawaycan
makeworkingmoreefficient,weshouldadoptedit.Justworkinghardisnotalways
resultinsuccess.Successpersonalwaystrydifferent
waystofinishthework.It’sthekeyofsuccess.