谁来帮我修改一下英语作文,奖金多多.谁帮我把这篇英语作文修改的更生动一下,查出单词、语法、标点错误,修改单词最好不要超过初中范围.谁改得越好悬赏就是谁的,还有更多的奖励!Todayis

　　谁来帮我修改一下英语作文,奖金多多.

　　谁帮我把这篇英语作文修改的更生动一下,查出单词、语法、标点错误,修改单词最好不要超过初中范围.谁改得越好悬赏就是谁的,还有更多的奖励!

　　Todayisafineday,thesunisshine,theskyisbule,andsomecloudysareinthesky.IamgoingtovisitGuiLinwithmygrandparentstoday.

　　WegotoGuiLinbybus,aftertwohours.WegettoGuiLin.First,wegotoTheSevenStarPark,it'sabeautifulandfamouspark.Therearesomefollowsinthepark,red,yellow,whiteandorange.Theyallareverylovelyandbeautiful.Wetakemanyphotosinfrontofthegraden.Alittlewhitelater,wegotothezoointhepark.Therearemanyanimalsinthezoo,likelion,monkey,tiger,birdandbeer.Ilikebridbest,becausetheyhavegotbeautifulfeatherandcansingmanygoodsongs.Wewatchanimals'activityandfeedsomethingforthem.

　　AfterleavingTheSevenStarPark.WegototheLiRiver.TherearemanyfamousplasesbesideorontheLiRver.Wemeetmanyforeignman.TheLiRiver'swaterisverycleananthehillsaregreen,itlookslikeawonderfulpicture.WestaybesidetheLiRiveralongtime,feelveryhappy.

　　Whenwearetired,wetakebushome,too.Wehavealovelytime!