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  求高手改一下我的六级英语作文.OntheImportantofaNameEverybodyhasaname.What’smore,alotofattentionisbeingdrawntoitandpeople’sideasarevarious.Ontheonehand,somepeopleholdtheviewthatthenameisveryimportant

  求高手改一下我的六级英语作文.

  OntheImportantofaName

  Everybodyhasaname.What’smore,alotofattentionisbeingdrawntoitandpeople’sideasarevarious.

  Ontheonehand,somepeopleholdtheviewthatthenameisveryimportant.Firstofall,thenamewillbethefirstimpactwhichyougivetoyournewfriend.Asweknowthefirstimpactisveryimportantinsomecaselikehuntingajob.Secondly,awonderfulnamecangiveyousomegoodcharacters.Forexample,amanwhocalled”LiGang”usuallyreallypowerful.Thelastbutnotleast,thenamecontaintheexpectationswhichparentsgivetothekids.

  Ontheotherhand,agreatmanypeopleinsistthatnameisindifferent.Theymainlypointoutthatweatherapersoncanbesuccessfuldependsonhowhardheorsheworkbuthasnothingtodowithhisorhername.

  Inmyopinion,thereshouldbesomethingrelatetothename.Butwhatwecanmostlytrustisourself.Weshouldrememberourname,andfighthard!

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2020-01-23 03:59
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胡浩天

  有些语法错误,另外像ontheonehandontheotherhand等等老掉牙的句子最好别用了.都用这些句子.老师改试卷的时候看到就烦.搞点有新意的句子.

2020-01-23 04:02:12

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