修改雅思作文Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetothis.Givereasonsfory

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　　Insomecountriesyoungpeopleareencouragedtoworkortravelforayearbetweenfinishinghighschoolandstartinguniversitystudies.

　　Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesforyoungpeoplewhodecidetothis.

　　Givereasonsforyouranswerandincludeanyrelevantexamplesfromyourownknowledgeorexperience.

　　Inmanycoutries,youngpeopleareusuallyhaveabreakrestbeforetheenrollingintheuniversitystudies.Someofthemechoosetohaveatravelandsomeofthemdecidetotakeforawork.Whethertheychoosewhichwaybetweenofthem.Ithinkitwillbegoodforthierfuturelife.

　　Incommonoftheyears,moreandmorepeoplehavenotedthattheycouldn'tbesatisfiedtogetacknowledgefromschools.Theythinktheycanlearnfromsocialactivities,too.Afterfromtheexaminationofuniversity,theyalwaysfeelthereislessstressthanbefore.Theyhaveasparetimetodosomethingtheylike.Meanwhiletheseyoungpeoplecangetlearnhowtotakeadvantageoftheirtheorityknowledgeintothereallylife.

　　Universitiesstudieshavedifferencewithhighshool.Iftheywantobecomegoodstudentstheymustcultivatedgoodstudyhabitsuchashowtogetalongwiththeothers.Nobodycouldteachthem.Sotheymuststudybythemselvesintheirsparetime.

　　Inmyopion,someyoungpeopletaketheirowntimewhentheyfinishinghighschooltotakeoutsideactivitiescanhelpthemtoimprovetheircapility.Theycanopentheireyesaswell.