【帮忙修改个英文作文DearjimmyWefeelsoterriblewhenweheardyouweresick.Yourenergy,power,broad-mindedarekeeprisingbeforemyeyes,Icannotbelievethishashappenedjustafter5monthsIsawyou.IlostmymindasifIamdreamin】

　　帮忙修改个英文作文

　　Dearjimmy

　　Wefeelsoterriblewhenweheardyouweresick.Yourenergy,power,broad-mindedarekeeprisingbeforemyeyes,Icannotbelievethishashappenedjustafter5monthsIsawyou.IlostmymindasifIamdreaming.

　　Thereisnoneedtosayyouareagreatteacher,youtaughtustodothingsinaproperwayandboostourconfidences.Youguideusforwardwhenwelostourdirection.Wearepridetobeamemberoftheteam.Wewillkeepgoingontospreadingyourvalue,yourmind,andalwaysbeloyaltoyou.

　　Wewillblessyou;hopethegodwillhelpyou.Wearelookingforwardtoyourhealing,eagertolistentoyourvoiceagain.

　　主要看看有没有语法错误，还有个问题是我觉得单句太多了，比如第二段，但是我又不知道怎么把它们连起来，我想表达个愿上帝在你身上彰显神迹的意思，不知掉怎么说，希望大家帮帮我，回答好的我会追加双倍分，谢谢