请大家帮忙改一下这篇英语演讲稿(初中水平)MyfamilyHello,everyone!I’mproudtomakeaspeechhere.Iamfortunatetoliveinaveryhappyfamily.Mymotherandfatherareverycaringofme.Wehavealotoffuntogether.Myfatherisa

　　请大家帮忙改一下这篇英语演讲稿(初中水平)

　　Myfamily

　　Hello,everyone!I’mproudtomakeaspeechhere.

　　Iamfortunatetoliveinaveryhappyfamily.Mymotherandfatherareverycaringofme.Wehavealotoffuntogether.Myfatherisateacher,heloveshisjob.Mymotherisahousewife,everydayshehasalotofhouseworktodo.Inwinter,althoughtheweatheriscold,ourhouseisalwaysverywarm.

　　Attheweekends,myfatherliketoreadbooksandgofishing.Heisgoodatgoingfishing.Mymotherlikestocookusinterestingfoodforus.Shewasagoodtastefoodforsweettooth.Wealwayshaveaveryniceweekendtogether.

　　Ilookforwardtohavingalotofnicememorieswithmyfamily.

　　Iloveeachpersoninmyfamily.Ilovemysweetwarmhome.

　　That’sall.Thankyou!

　　Shewasagoodtastefoodforsweettooth.这个句子究竟有没有问题?

　　我感觉好像要把was改成has,

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