帮忙看一下考研英语作文Formthefirstpicture,wecanseetheflowerisstadiesahouse.Thesecondpicture,wecanknowthetheflowerisfacingoutwindanrain.Thepicturetellusthatpeoplemustundergomanypainanddifficulty.Onlyint

　　帮忙看一下考研英语作文

　　Formthefirstpicture,wecanseetheflowerisstadiesahouse.Thesecondpicture,wecanknowthetheflowerisfacingoutwindanrain.Thepicturetellusthatpeoplemustundergomanypainanddifficulty.Onlyinthisway,canwebecomestrong.

　　Therearemanyreasonsexampliningthephenomenon.TakethefilmGonewhitWindasatypicalexample.Ontheonhand,manysuccessfulpeopleexperiencealotofWindandRuininthelive.Ontheotherhand,moreandmoreparentexcessivelyprotectthemselveskid.Wemustundrestandthatexcessiveprotectingisahurt.Soparentshouldencouragekidtofacevariousdifficulty.

　　Wegettingwhatformthepicture?Considerallthereasons,Ithinkthatweoughttounderstandsomethink.First,peopeohavetoencountermanghard.Second,weneedtokeepanoptimisticandhardworkorstudy.Thereforewemustlearnfacevariouspain.

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