英语短文改错题（逻辑错误,语法错误,拼写错误）ABlindManAllisminfortune,atleast,IhadeadmittedisforalongtimeIwasaclear-eyedinfantandchildbeforetwelveyearsold,Atthatyear,myawe-inspirngvisionwasdimmed

　　英语短文改错题（逻辑错误,语法错误,拼写错误）

　　ABlindMan

　　Allisminfortune,atleast,Ihadeadmittedisforalongtime

　　Iwasaclear-eyedinfantandchildbeforetwelveyearsold,Atthatyear,myawe-inspirngvisionwasdimmedbyanaccident.

　　Ithoughttheangelwhopresidemyvisionhasabandonedourindestructiblecompanionship.

　　Soon,IrediscoveredthatIwasinadequatetoconfrontwhathadhashappenedandhanppening.

　　Self-defeatedconquerdmyheart,Themoodalwaysdespair.IthoughtIcouldnolongerdoanythingbymyself.

　　ButtheJesusstilllookafterme,usehismajestic,sincerelypowerindisposaleveryearthlythings.ThoughIdidn’tknowthatyetrhen.

　　Oneday,Iwaswalkingalongtheriveralongrheriver,steppingonthefertileground,Somevoice-inexactlyit’smusicplayedbyNature-washearedbymycuteears.MeanwhileIfeltIwasassimilatedbytheworld,partlyitarousedmyheartwhichhadsleptsolong.Henceforth,Iwasaddictedwithmusic.Everyday,whenthedawncome,Ifyouatthesameplacethen,youcanfindafigure,standagainsttheflowingstream,wassingingasongwithoutwords.That’sme,whowassingingwithamany-voicedNature-Chorus.

　　WhenIwassinging,Icouldfeelingthewindsembodiedsoil’sperfume,Icouldfeelingthecloudsembodiedfruits’flavour.Icouldfeelingthetideebbandflow,Icouldfeelingtheflowerwitherandbloom,Icouldfeelinfinitelythingsthoughmyeyesdisused.

　　“WhentheLordclosethedoor,somewhereHeopensawindow”

　　名词形容词其实没明确界限，可以多用的。多多指教！

　　我没觉得宗教意义极深啊？我不是宗教人士。