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　　请你们帮我看一下我这篇英语作文有没有错误的地方.

　　有错误的话请告诉我怎么改,

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　　Thissentenceisveryfunny,right?

　　Butittellusmanyvaluablethings.

　　Forexample,ittellus,weshoulddoanythingwithconfidence.

　　Becauseyouneedknowyoumustdobetterthansomebody.

　　Eventhoughyouareverystupid,therearemustevermorestupidpeopleapplaudyou.

　　So,tryourbesttodoanythingwithbraveandconfidence.