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  一篇英语记叙文,初四教师请评个分(15满分)ANUNFORGETTABLETHINGI'vebeeninthismiddleschoolfor4years.Andnow,it'stimetoleave.Thereweremanythingswhichhappenedbetweenteachersandme.ButIwouldneverforgettheexperi

  一篇英语记叙文,初四教师请评个分(15满分)

  ANUNFORGETTABLETHING

  I'vebeeninthismiddleschoolfor4years.Andnow,it'stimetoleave.Thereweremanythingswhichhappenedbetweenteachersandme.ButIwouldneverforgettheexperiencewhenIfirsttalkedwithmyEnglishteacher.

  Itwasafoggydayintheafternoon.AndIwasunhappyonthatday.Apparentlysensitivetoclassmates'criticism,IrushedtotheofficeofmyEnglishteacher.IaskedherwhetherIdidsomethingbadandsherepliedthatIdidn't.ThenIasked.'Whyaretheysoseriousevenjealoustome?'Butheranswermadememoredoubtful.HeransweristhatIhaven'tfoundtheturemeaningofpeaceandhappiness!SheknewIcouldn'tunderstand.Thensheexplained.'Ifyoucanfindpeaceinanythingyoumeet,you'llfindthetruemeaningofpeaceatthattime.'Irememberedwhatshesaid.WhenIfirstgottothisschool,classmatesaskedmetodothingsmorequickly,Iwouldoftensay.'Don'trushme.'Butnow,I'llsay.'WouldyoupleasewaitaminutebeforeIcompleteit?'

  I'vebeencompletlychangedafterthisconversation.ThankstomyEnglishteacher,Iammorefriendlytopeoplearoundmenow.I'llneverforgetit!Never!

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