【求修改初三英语作文大概会有很多语法错误……UnforgettableExperience,Somememorywillnotdisappearwhenthetimepast.I'm15yearsoldnow,butanexperienceinmychildhoodisstillclearandunforgettable.Oneday,allmyfamilywe】

　　求修改初三英语作文

　　大概会有很多语法错误……

　　UnforgettableExperience,

　　Somememorywillnotdisappearwhenthetimepast.I'm15yearsoldnow,butanexperienceinmychildhoodisstillclearandunforgettable.Oneday,allmyfamilywenttoclimbamountain.TherefathertoldmeifIwasthefirstonetoreachthetop,Iwouldbegivenatoy.Themountainwashighanddifficulttoclimb,butIdidn'tgiveup.IntheendIgottothetopfirst.IlearnedthatIshouldn'tgiveupwhenImeetwithdifficultiesfromthisexperience,itwasreallyunforgettable.

　　恩,把语法错误挑出来然后修改一下就可以了……实在羞于见人所以我匿名了……