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　　大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题RidingthehorseonthegrasslandDuringthetrip,Ialsohadanunforgettableexperience:ridingthehorseonthegrassland.ItwasthefirsttimethatIshouldridethehorsealone.Thehorsewhichwoul

　　大家帮我看看这篇英语短文有没有问题

　　Ridingthehorseonthegrassland

　　Duringthetrip,Ialsohadanunforgettableexperience:ridingthehorseonthegrassland.ItwasthefirsttimethatIshouldridethehorsealone.

　　Thehorsewhichwouldberiddenbymewasabrownandbeautifulhorse.And,itwasverysmall,itwasthesmallesthorseIhaveeverridden.Atfirst,Iwasafraidoffallingdownfromthehorse.Iwasverynervousandcouldn’tdrawmyselfup.But,afternearlyhalfanhourforpracticing,Iknewhowtorideahorse.Ibegantoridethehorseandenjoyedthewarmsunshinehappily.

　　Ihadagoodtimeonthegrassland.Whatahappylifethepeopletherehave!

　　Theendofthesummerholiday

　　Summerholidaywillbefinishedsoon.Thehomeworkhasalmostfinished.Duringthesummerholiday,Ilearntalot,broadenmymindbytravellingandhelpothersbydoingthevoleenteerwork.Now,it’stheendofthesummerholiday,anewtermiscoming.Thefirstthingofthenewtermisthetestwhichcandetectionourhomework.

　　IhopeIcanhaveaninterestingnewterm.Letcheerforit!

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　　Ridingthehorseonthegrassland

　　Duringthetrip,Ialsohadanunforgettableexperience:ridingthehorseonthegrassland.ItwasthefirsttimeIrodethehorsealone.

　　Thehorsewhichwouldberiddenbymewasabrown(and去掉)beautifulhorse.And,itwasverysmall,itwasthesmallesthorseIhaveeverridden..Atfirst,Iwasafraidoffallingdownfromthehorse.Iwasverynervousandcouldn’tdrawmyselfup.But,afternearlyhalfanhourfor(of)practicing(practice),Iknewhowtorideahorse.Ibegantoridethehorseandenjoyedthewarmsunshinehappily.

　　Ihadagoodtimeonthegrassland.Whatahappylifethepeopletherehave!

2020-01-23 21:01:11

杜茂康

　　你告诉我在那里改了

2020-01-23 21:04:02

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　　我晕，最前面一段有一点修改，后面的我加括号了，

2020-01-23 21:08:07

杜茂康

　　麻烦第二段也帮我看看

2020-01-23 21:08:40

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　　TheendofthesummerholidaySummerholidaywill（befinished）改成OVERsoon.Thehomeworkhasalmost(加上been)finished.Duringthesummerholiday,Ilearntalot,broadenmymindbytravellingandhelp(此处加，ed是过去对吧)others(by)改成todo(doing去掉)work(加上asavolunteer此处是我帮你改的，我觉得这样比较好).Now,it’stheendofthesummerholiday,anewtermiscoming.Thefirstthingofthenewtermisthetestwhichcandetection（这个要用动词detect）ourhomework.IhopeIcanhaveaninterestingnewterm.Let（加上'S）cheerforit!

2020-01-23 21:12:22

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