Dear Peter，

　　Hearing that you'11return back to your country，I think it was a good idea to choose some items typical of Chinese culture to take with you．

　　The item come first into my mind is the Chinese kite，the cultural symbol of my hometown．Kite，mostly made of paper，are often designing into diverse shapes，some with lovely animal images like butterflies，eagles and so on．People can fly kites in the open air，where is a popular form of entertainment．Besides，a pen container with the Chinese ink painting on it is also a nice choose．I'm sure each time you use them，you will recall∧unforgettable experience in China．

　　I hope my advice can be helpfully to you．Wish you a pleasant journey home．

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　详

　　1．去掉back考查词语用法．return包含有back的词义，back是多余的，要去掉．

　　2．was改为is考查动词时态．此处指提现在的情况，要用一般现在时态．

　　3．come改为coming考查现在分词．The item与come之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语coming first into my mind作后置定语．

　　4．Kite改为Kites考查名词复数．谓语动词are是复数形式，主语Kites也应用复数形式，此处复数形式表示种类．

　　5．designing改为designed考查动词语态．kites与design之间是动宾关系，要用一般现在时的被动语态．

　　6．where改为which考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词是前面整个句子，在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．

　　7．choose改为choice考查名词．不定冠词a后接名词．

　　8．them改为it考查代词．it指代a pen container．

　　9．recall后加the/this考查冠词或代词．此处experience是可数名词，加the/this表示特指．

　　10．helpfully改为helpful考查形容词．be动词后用形容词作表语．