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  请问这样的作文,在雅思学术类考试中可以得几分呢?请用力拍砖,给我建议吧.

  问题应该是有些人认为工业是否应该投资教育.

  Alongwiththedevelopmentofindustrializationandglobalization,aneverincreasingpeopleholdtheviewthatindustryshouldtakemoreresponsibilityforeducation.Inmyopinion,Ifoundmyselfinagreementofit.Thereasonforthinkingthiswillbegiveninthisessay.

  Educationplaysamoresignificantroleinindustry.Thereasonforwhyitisvitalisthatwecanneveremphasizetheimportanceoftechnologicalinnovationtoomuch.Onlywithhigherandbettermachine,canweproductbettergoodsandcreateabetterlife.Infact,itistheindustrythatisthemostessentialpartofacountry.Forexample,ifsomeso-calledby-productscanberecycledbyanewmachine,wecanstopwastinganymoreandimprovethevalueoftherawmaterialinthesametime.However,anewmachineneedstobeinventedbyprofessorwhohasacceptedahighereducation.

  Moreover,educationisnecessarytohelpindustrytodecreasetheircostonnewmachineimportedoverseasoremployingaprofessorfromothercompaniesorcountries.Nevertheless,somepeoplemaybefirmlyconvincedthatitwillcostmoretoinvesteducationthantoemployexpertsorbuyinganewmachine.Infact,theyarejustoversimplifyingthesituation.Althoughintheshorttermtheyaremayberight,theyarewrongifitisinthelongterm.Investingineducationwillbethebestchoiceandspendlessmoneythanotherways.What’smore,companiesalsocultivatetheirownprofessorsandexperts,aswellasnewmachine,whichcanbeexportedoremployedbyothercompaniesandcountriesformakingmoney.

  Allinall,industryshoulddomoredutiesineducationintermsofinvesting.Notonlymakingmoreandmoremoneyinalongtermbutalsodecliningthedependenceofexporting.

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2020-01-23 18:28
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刘华咏

  6-6.5,理论值.基本没有语法错误,结构清楚.

2020-01-23 18:29:24

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