英语作文求批改（考研）AboutdiligenceThereisagrowingnationalconsciousnessoftheimportanceofdiligence.Asisvividlyshowninpicture,thereiscollegestudentstudyingintheclassroom,doinghomeworkdiligently.Theimplicationisno

　　英语作文求批改（考研）

　　Aboutdiligence

　　Thereisagrowingnationalconsciousnessoftheimportanceofdiligence.Asisvividlyshowninpicture,thereiscollegestudentstudyingintheclassroom,doinghomeworkdiligently.Theimplicationisnotonlyinformativebutinstructiveaswell.Thispictureillustratesthetruemeaningofdiligencebystressingthefactthathardworkismentalstrength,whichcansupportusnomatterhowdifficulttheproblemweconfrontbecomes.

　　Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexampleofdiligencewiththefollowingonebeingtheforemost.Trainingdiligentlyintheswimmingpooldayafterday,PhelpswithhisteammateswontheOlympicGamesagainandagain.Accordingtoonerecentsurveyconductedbyacertainnationalorganization98.5%ofpeopleinallwalksoflifearedevotedthemselvestotheircareer.Withouthardwork,wewouldn'thaveahappylife.

　　Consideringeveryaspectofthispositivephenomenon,weshouldbearinmindthatdiligenceisofdirectlysignificancetobothoursocietyandourselves.Thereforeallwalksoflifesuchasstudents,doctors,teachersandworkers,shouldworkpassionately.Inaddition,thegovernmenthastheresponsibilitytoeducateeverycitizentobeindustrious.Inconclusion,wehaveeveryreasontobeconvincedthatwecanachievemoreachievementsthroughworkingdiligently.

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