【马上考研了几句英语作文批改纠错总觉得第一句话有点怪怪的帮我看看吧Brieflyandvividly,asisshownabove,alotofpeople,withoutanysmileontheirface,areplayingcomputergamesinsmallcells.What'smore,thereisan】

　　马上考研了几句英语作文批改纠错总觉得第一句话有点怪怪的帮我看看吧

　　Brieflyandvividly,asisshownabove,alotofpeople,withoutanysmileontheirface,areplayingcomputergamesinsmallcells.What'smore,thereisanotionunderthedrawing,whichmeans:thenearandfaroftheInternet.Atfirstsight,thismayseemacommoncartoon,butcarefulweighingonsecondmind,nobetterpicturecanillustratethebadeffectoftheInternet.