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  【雅思大作文求批改Somepeoplesayuniversitystudentsshouldpayfortheirtuitionfees.Someothersaythegovernmentshouldpayforthetuitionfees.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?Inpresent-daysociety,itisgenerallyrecognizedth】

  雅思大作文求批改

  Somepeoplesayuniversitystudentsshouldpayfortheirtuitionfees.Someothersaythegovernmentshouldpayforthetuitionfees.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?

  Inpresent-daysociety,itisgenerallyrecognizedthatuniversityeducationasignificantroleinourmodernlife.Butatthesametime,controversyhasarisenaboutwhetherthestudentorthegovernmentisresponsibleforthepaymentofthetuitionfees.

  Itisobviousthattherearevariousofreasonsthatthestudentsshouldpayforthefeesbythemselves.Inthefirstplace,thestudentsarethedirectandfinalbeneficiariesofuniversityeducation.Specifically,theultimateobjectiveofuniversityeducationistoservethestudents.Inthesecondplace,thegovernmenthasalreadyshoulderthebasiceducationpayment.Forinstance,studentspaylittlewhentheyareinprimaryandsecondaryschools.atthattime,themajorityexpenditureofeducationarepaidbythegovernment.lastly,thegovernmentneedtoinvestinotherareas,suchasscientificresearch,healthcare,andallofthoseneedaamountofmoney.

  Ontheotherhand,thereareseveralaspectsagainsttheargumentsabove.Tobeginwith,itseemsthatpeople,asataxpayer,havealreadyaccomplishedtheirresponsibilitiesanditistheirrighttoenjoytheeducationforfree.Furthermore,thegovernmentistheleaderofthewholecountry.Toprecise,itisresponsibleforthemtoimprovetheeducationleveloftheircitizens.Evenso,thegovernmentburdentoomuchpressure.Forinstance,fundingscientistresearchwhichaccountforabigpartoffinancialoutput.

  Toconclude,Ibelievethatthegovernmentandthestudentsshouldsharetheresponsibilitiesoftuitionfees.specifically,thegovernmentpayasmallpartoffeesliketherentofaccommodationandstudentspaytheotherfeesbythemselves.

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2020-01-26 07:23
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林云峰

  6.5吧

  还是蛮多wrongwords和语法上的问题的

  goodluck

2020-01-26 07:27:37

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