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　　求帮忙修改一篇高中英语自我介绍

　　请帮忙修改修改.有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来.希望多帮我改用一些从句,写的差还请谅解,修改很到位的另外加分

　　Helloeveryone.HappyChristmasDay.Mynameisxxx.Iamsixteenyearsold.IgraduatefromXXXMiddleSchool.

　　Inmysparetime.Iliketoreadsomebooks.Ithinkreadingcouldenlargemyknowledge.Imuststudyhardsothatmyten-yearhardworkwillpayoff.IhopeIcanbeadmittedtotheidealuniversity.Ihopewecanworktogethertoprogresstogether.Weshouldn’tletdownourparents.