一篇课后短文练习,写了下,估计错少不了.麻烦大家忙时候帮偶查查错,尽量能标出为何错了,HelloPeterI’mgladthatyouaremynewpen-friend.Letmetellyousomethingaboutmyselfandmyhobbies.Firstly,Pleaseallowme

　　一篇课后短文练习,写了下,估计错少不了.麻烦大家忙时候帮偶查查错,尽量能标出为何错了,

　　HelloPeter

　　I’mgladthatyouaremynewpen-friend.Letmetellyousomethingaboutmyselfandmyhobbies.

　　Firstly,Pleaseallowmeintroducemyself.MynameisLiMingandmygoodfriendsalwayscallmexiaoR,Infact,it’smynickname.IhopeyoucancallmexiaoRtoo.Thoughweareonlypen-friend,Ithinkwewillbegoodfriendbeforelong.(Hereneedaconnectingword,makesentencecomfortable,butIdon’tshouldwrite?)Iwillbe22yearsoldintwoweeks.Atpresent,I’mstillanundergraduate,butI’llgraduatenextyear.

　　Secondly,Letwetalkaboutmyhobby.Myhobbyisalot.Suchaslisteningmusic,watchingTV,playinggames,playingchess,etc.ButIlikesportsratherthantheothershobby.Especiallyisfootball(Idon’tknowifcansayit),I’mgoodatit.Youknow?Iattendedbaiduibei(百队杯)before2004!AtpresentI’manormalmemberatmyschool.Bytheway,Thereisapieceoflargegroundtotheeastofmyhome.Itsareaisenough100*80meters!It’scool!SoImustbeplayingfootballwithmyfriendstwoorthreetimesamonthatlot.Otherwise,Iusedtomakeplanemodel,butIdon’tanymoretimenow.

　　Finallywhatkindofsportdoyoulike?Areyouafootballfan,aren’tyou?Whatareyoudoinginyoursparetime?Expectyouhear(Idon’tknowifcansayit).

　　Yourstruly

　　LiMing