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　　请高手帮我改个短文（有语法等错误的）,顺便告诉为什么?

　　Iamveryexcitedtohaveacceptedane-mailfrom1___

　　you.I'mgladyouhavemadesuchagreatprogress2___

　　thatyoucanwriteyoure-mailgoodChinese.Iread3___

　　youre-mailtomyparentsandshowthemthephotoyou4___

　　sentittome.Howtimeflies!Ourfriendshiphaslasted5___

　　forseveralmonths.Wehavegottoknowbutlearneda6___

　　lotfromeachother.Yes,itisclearlythatyoulifein7___

　　yourcountryisquitedifferentfromme.Thanksagain8___

　　forwritingtome.I'mlookingforwardtohearfrom9___

　　yousoon.Bestwishestoyouandyourfamily.10___