麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记!NationalDayThisweekwehavenoclass,becausethisisNationalDay.InOctober1.Itwassunny.Theweatherwasbeautiful.Inthemorning,Iwentoutwithmymom.Wewenttomountaintotakeawalk.Therewasal
麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记!
NationalDay
Thisweekwehavenoclass,becausethisisNationalDay.
InOctober1.Itwassunny.Theweatherwasbeautiful.Inthemorning,Iwentoutwithmymom.Wewenttomountaintotakeawalk.Therewasalotofpeopleinthemountain.Wesawsomepeopletodomorningexercise,somepeoplerunning……Mymomsaid“Thereisbeautiful.Hereairisreallyfresh.Ilikethere.”
InOctober2.Myauntcamemyfamily.ShewantedtosurftheInternetforsearchdatum.Ihelpedhersearchsomedarum.Shewasveryhappy.Shesaid“Youaregoodchild.”
InOctober3.Mygoodfriendsgotback.Iplayedwiththem.Wewenttoouralmamater.Weallverylikethere.Thatwasgreat.Thenwewenttothelibrary.Wereadsomebooksthere.Wewasveryhappy.
InOctober4.Iwenttobarbershopwithmymom.Thebarbercuthairforour.Isawmyfriend.Shesawmynewlookisverysurprised.
InOctober5.Ivisitmyuncle.HewatchedTVathome.Ihelpedhimcleantheroom.Hetaughtmeplaychess.Istayeduntil6o’clock.Thatwasrelaxing.
ThisismyNationalvacation.Itwasrelaxingandgreat!
麻烦帮我修改一下这篇英语周记``!