【我刚刚写了篇英语作文,请各路高手帮我修改,指导我下,英语作文如下:SafetyTheSpringFestivaliscomingsoon,soweshouldcareaboutPersonalsafety.Firstly,whenwegoout,weshouldpayattentiontotrafficsafety.Beforewe】
我刚刚写了篇英语作文,请各路高手帮我修改,指导我下,英语作文如下:
Safety
TheSpringFestivaliscomingsoon,soweshouldcareaboutPersonalsafety.
Firstly,whenwegoout,weshouldpayattentiontotrafficsafety.Beforewecrosstheraod,weshouldobeythetrafficrules,orelsethatisagainsttherules.
Secondly,whenwestayathome,wealsoshouldkeepsafe.Ifweareathomealone,weshouldnotusefire.becausewecanbehurtbyfire.Fireisdangerous.butElectricityismoredangerous.weshoulduseelectricitycarefully.Itisdangeroustotouchthetelevisionwithwethand.
Ifwedoeverythingscarefully,wewillbehappyeveryday!