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  【哥哥.姐姐们帮我改改语病Subject:ThemaindifferencebetweenmycollegelifeandmymiddleschoollifeWhenIwasinjuniorhighschoolthesystemisstrict.You`remanagedbytheteacher,theclassmonitorortheordercontroller.Forbeaccep】

  哥哥.姐姐们帮我改改语病

  Subject:Themaindifferencebetweenmycollegelifeandmymiddleschoollife

  WhenIwasinjuniorhighschoolthesystemisstrict.You`remanagedbytheteacher,theclassmonitorortheordercontroller.Forbeacceptedbyabettercollege,wehavetospendmuchmoretimeonourtextbook,mostofourdaytimewereoccupiedbyourhomework,wedonothaveenoughleisuredhours.

  Theorganizationofcollegeismoremanagezble.Alloftheadministrationrelyonyourself-controlanditistimetolearnhowtodealwithyourthings,notonlyindicatethestudypartofyourlife,suchas,doyourownlaundary,makebed....

  Thedifferencesofourlifebetweeninunivercityandinhighschoolisprominent,especiallythefirstyearofyourcollegemaybealongwithalittleuncomfortable,sothere`stwoproblemswaittobesolved:One,howtofacetheunexpectedmatter;Two,howtohandleitintheproperway.

  改的全的追加50

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2020-02-04 08:32
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姜小成

  按照你原来的行文方式的单纯的语病修改:WhenIwasinjuniorhighschool(Middleschool是初中更常用的说法吧?高中就是Highschool,我看这个topic应该是要求写高中的,但不知道为什麽是middleschool...)thesyst...

2020-02-04 08:35:22

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