英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误Hello.Mynameis.Afterabattlewhichlastedthreeyears.IgraduatedfromNO.1MiddleSchoolandImstartinganewchapterherenow.Imanoutgoingperson.peoplecaneasilycommunicatewithmeandIlovemak

　　英语自我介绍作文,求指出错误

　　Hello.Mynameis.Afterabattlewhichlastedthreeyears.IgraduatedfromNO.1MiddleSchoolandImstartinganewchapterherenow.

　　Imanoutgoingperson.peoplecaneasilycommunicatewithmeandIlovemakingfriends.AlsoImdelighttolendahandwhenyouneedhelp.

　　Ihavealotofhobbies.Butpersonally,Idoliketoplayvideogamesbest.TheschoolworkwasunderpressurewhenIwasinmiddleschool.Andplayvideogamesduringtherighttimecouldmakemerelax

　　DuringthemiddleschoolIvebeenveryfoundofEnglisheversince.ImenjoywatchingallsortsofforeignTVseries.IthinkitwouldbehelpfulformetolearnEnglishbetter.

　　Havefaithandgoalforgood.Thatsmykeytotheproblems.Thecourseinhighschoolmightbeevenharder,butIbelieveImcapabletohandlethem.Asthesayinggoes:Wherethereisawill,theresaway.

　　Thanksforyourattention.