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  【中考英语作文修改我即将中考,自己预测一下作文写写,写了一篇saygoodbyetoschool,不过英语基础不扎实,所以很多东西都很模糊,我发一下作文,词句都应该比较普通,没啥亮点,不过只】

  中考英语作文修改

  我即将中考,自己预测一下作文写写,写了一篇saygoodbyetoschool,不过英语基础不扎实,所以很多东西都很模糊,我发一下作文,词句都应该比较普通,没啥亮点,不过只要语句通顺,没有语法错误就好.

  Fouryearsago.Icametohere——mymiddleschool.

  Mymiddleschoolisabeautifulschool.Therearemanytreesandflowersintheschool'sgarden.Andtheskyisblue,theairis

  fresh.

  WhenIcametohere,Iwasfullofcuriosityschoollife.

  Imadealotofnewfriendsonthefirstday.ButIthinkteachersareserious,theclassesareboring.Tomysurprise,theteacherisverykindandthecalssissointerestingthatIfellinlovewithmymiddleschool.

  Butnow,Ihavetosaygoodbyetomymiddleschool,Ihavetosaygoodbyetomyfriends,Ihavetogoodbyetomyteachers,Iamtoosadtocannotstopcrying.

  Alsowedonotwanttosaygoodbyetoschool,butwehavetofaceit,Ibelievewemustbegotohighschoolwhatwewantto.

  Goodbye,myschool,Iwillneverforgetyou!

  连字符不会用,卷面作文时肯定不会拆开单词的,所以有些单词这上面有些单词就跑到下一行了.

  麻烦英语高手给修改一下,语法单词的错误,可以的话按照中考评分标准,问一下我这样写得扣多少分,谢谢了!(假设满分15分)

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2020-02-04 14:09
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  Fouryearsago.Icamehere——mymiddleschool.

  Mymiddleschoolisabeautifulschool.Therearemanytreesandflowersintheschool'sgarden.Theskyisblue,andtheairis

  fresh.

  WhenIcamehere,Iwasfullofcuriosityaboutschoollife.

  Imadealotofnewfriendsonthefirstday.Tomysurprise,theteacherwasverykindandthecalsswassointerestingthatIfellinlovewithmymiddleschool.

  Butnow,Ihavetosaygoodbyetomymiddleschool.Ihavetosaygoodbyetomyfriends.Ihavetogoodbyetomyteachers.IamtoosadsothatIcannotstopcrying.

  Wedonotwanttosaygoodbyetoschool,butwehavetofaceit.Ibelievewemustgotohighschool.

  Goodbye,myschool,Iwillneverforgetyou!

  建议你尽量用简单句,少用逗号,多用句号表达。复杂句有几处错误,其它都还可以,应该有11分左右。

  直接在网页上修改的,难免有错误,有问题可以追问。

  全部手打,望采纳,谢谢。

2020-02-04 14:11:17
程桂胜

  应该是Iamtoosadtostopcrying.

2020-02-04 14:15:24
高建国

  Fouryearsago.Icametohere——mymiddleschool.

  Therearemanytreesandflowersintheschool.Itisverybeautiful.Andtheskyisblue,theairisfresh.

  Atbegining.Iwasfullofcuriosityinmymiddleschoollife.Imeetalotofnewclassmatesonthefirstday.Ithinkteachersmaybeserious.Tomysurprise,theteacherisverykindandfriendly.Thecalssisinteresting,Ibegantolikestudinginmymiddleschool.

  Now,Ihavetosaygoodbyetomymiddleschool,Ihavetosaygoodbyetomyfriends,Ihavetogoodbyetomyteachers,Iamtoosadtostopcrying.

  Alsowedonotwanttosaygoodbyetoschool,butwehavetofaceit,Allofusshouldgoforward

  tostudyinhighschool.

  Goodbye,mymiddleschoolperiod(时代)!Youareinmymemory,Iwillneverforgetyou!

  错的不少……

  好好学

2020-02-04 14:15:55
李武强

  here是副词,不要加to

  curiosity和schoollife之间要介词

2020-02-04 14:17:32
包晔

  可以试试去一些专题网站,比如ABC天下,他们的写作课程就做得很受欢迎,主教+助教的方式,时间地点都不受限制

2020-02-04 14:19:04

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