英语的一分钟演讲,进来帮我改改吧!急参加一个比赛,帮我改改,Helloeveryone,It’sreallyagreathonnortohavethisopportunityforintroducingmyself.I’mfromWenzhoumiddleschool.MynameisVera.NowI’m16.Tobehonest,

　　英语的一分钟演讲,进来帮我改改吧!急

　　参加一个比赛,帮我改改,

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　　帮我改得通畅点吧！