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  托福求大侠修改独立写作.doyouagreeordisagreethatateacherwhoisseriousandstrictismoreefficientthanateacherwhouseshumorsandiseasygoing?Variouskindsofteacherstaughtmeduringmy14schoolyears.Iwouldnotagreewith

  托福求大侠修改独立写作.

  doyouagreeordisagreethatateacherwhoisseriousandstrictismoreefficientthanateacherwhouseshumorsandiseasygoing?

  Variouskindsofteacherstaughtmeduringmy14schoolyears.Iwouldnotagreewiththeissueabovesinceitwasthoseteacherswhowerehumorousandeasygoingbutnotthosewhowerestrictandseriousthatmademestudymoreefficientlyinmymemories.

  Itistruethatstudentswilldothingsastheirteachertellsthemmoreefficientlyiftheyhaveastrictteacher.Becausestudentsareafraidofthatkindofteacherandhavetodotheworktheirteachertoldthemintime.Butweatherthestudentsarelearningwellorunderstandingtheirworkisnotsure.Moststudentsmaybejustwanttofinishtheirworktoavoidthepunishmentoftheirteacher;andthustheydonotthinkingcarefullyorevencheatingothers'work.Ifsoitobviouslycannotimprovetheefficientofstudents'studying.

  Alsostudentsarealwaysafraidofaskingquestionstothoseteacherswhoareseriousandstrict.Thustheirproblemsinlearningthesubjectwillaccumulateastimegoeson.Allofthesequestionswillslowdowntheirfollowingstudiesiftheydonotsolvethemintime.Instead,aneasygoingteacherwillbemuchbetter.Mymathteacherinmyseniorhighschoolwassuchawoman.Shewassokindthatallthestudentsdonotworryifshewillhavebadresponsewhenaskingherquestions.Andwhenshesaidsomethingconfusingintheclass,wedonotafraidtopointitout.Thismadetheknowledgeinhermindextremelyunderstoodbyus.

  Inaddition,teacherswhousehumorsimprovetheleisureatmosphereforstudentsstudyinganddiscussingquestions.Comparedwithseriousandstrictteacherstheymakestudentsinterestinwhattheyarelearningandabsorbtheknowledgebetter.WhenIwasinjuniormiddleschool,studentswerealwayssleepyandhungryatthethirdclassesinthemorning.Butwhenitwasphysicsclassinwhichtheteacherwasahumorman,mostofmyclassmatesgotridoftheirbeautifuldreamsandforgotthetired.Healwaysusedfunnystoriesoranalogywhenhewasteachingdifficultandboringproblems.Inthiswayweunderstoodthosephysicalproblemmuchbetterthanothersubjects,andouraveragescoresofthefinalexamwasashighas90whosethefullscorewas100.

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2020-02-04 15:59
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汪彦

  effective用太多了,词汇不够,多背些范文.

  不要老用自己的例子,讲口语也就罢了,写作里面自己的例子不具有说服力.

  语法错误很多,"andouraveragescoresofthefinalexamwasashighas90whosethefullscorewas100"这句话不想评价了.用中文的方式翻译成英文的痕迹很明显,如果我能看出来考官肯定也能看出来,还是多背些范文,看看人家的句子是怎么写的.

  思路上还说得过去,感觉这文章不是很好写,看看讲教师类的文章能用上哪些话,尽量做到elaborated,我觉得海伦凯勒的老师就是个不错的例子.

  PS:开头段最好还是把topic再交代下

2020-02-04 16:00:24

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