帮我看看演讲稿HelloeveryoneToday,Iamg-查字典问答网
分类选择

来自蔡嘉荣的问题

  帮我看看演讲稿HelloeveryoneToday,Iamgladtobeabletostandheretogiveyouthisspeech!Mytopicis"mother".Taketheword'family'.Strikeoutthe'm'formotherandthe'y'foryouth--andallyouhaveleftis'fail'.Iweremovedbythis

  帮我看看演讲稿

  Helloeveryone

  Today,Iamgladtobeabletostandheretogiveyouthisspeech!

  Mytopicis"mother".

  Taketheword'family'.Strikeoutthe'm'formotherandthe'y'foryouth--andallyou

  haveleftis'fail'.Iweremovedbythissentence.

  Whenyouarefarawayfromyourfamilyandfeelespeciallylonely,whowillyouthinkof?

  Whenyouareintroubleanddonotknowwhichwaytochoose,whowillyouthinkof?

  Yes,it'smotherthatyouwillalwaysthinkof.

  Inthisholiday,Mymothersufferedgreatlyfromapainintheback.Shedidnotdo

  housework.AfterIsendingmysistertoschool.Iboughtgroceriesinthemarket.Iwashedthe

  vegetable.Howcoldthewateritis!Myfingersfeltlikeblocksofice.Afterlunch,Ihadto

  washthedishesandcleanthefloor.Onthe3'clock,Itookmymothertoseethedoctor.Onthe

  way,IthinkofwhenIwasachild,onceIhadafever,mymothertookmetoseethedoctor.She

  wasworriedaboutme.NowI'malreadyagrownup.Iamabletotakecareofmymother.

  Mothergavemeherlovewithoutaskingforreturn,Howdeepmotherloveis!

  课前5分钟演讲的

  分类错了。不是要翻译,要帮我看看有没有语法毛病之类的问题。

1回答
2020-02-06 17:55
我要回答
请先登录
韩益亮

  中国人讲话,常用"今天...",英语不那么常见,删掉好点.Mytopicis"mother"是不恰当的.可以改为

  Iamverygladtobeheretogiveyouthisspeech!

  Mytopicisthe"mother".

  下面有一些修改,供参考,有些介词inon,冠词a,the

  时态等我给改了好几个地方,你看一下是否恰当,可以想想其中区别

  Now,let'sconsidertheword'family'.Ifwedeletetheletter'm'formotherandtheletter'y'foryouth--thenallwehave

  leftis'fail'.Iammovedbythissentence.

  Whenyouarefarawayfromyourfamilyandfeelinglonelyseriously,whowillyouthinkof?

  Whenyouareintroubleanddonotknowwhichwaytochoose,whowillyouthinkof?

  Yes,it'sourmotherwhowewillalwaysthinkof.

  Onthisholiday,Mymothersufferedagreatpainontheback.Shecould'tdoany

  housework.AfterIsendingmysistertoschool,Iboughtgroceriesinthemarket.Iwashedthe

  vegetables.Howcoldthewateritwas!Myfingersfeltlikeblocksofice.Afterlunch,Ihadto

  washthedishesandcleanthefloor.At3'clock,Itookmymothertoseeadoctor.Onthe

  way,IrememberedwhenIwasachild,onceIhadafever,mymothertookmetoseeadoctor.She

  wasworriedaboutme.NowI'malreadyagrownup.Iamabletotakecareofmymother.

  Mothergavemeherlovewithoutaskingforanyreturn,Howdeepthemother'sloveis!

2020-02-06 17:56:43

最新问答

推荐文章

猜你喜欢

附近的人在看

推荐阅读

拓展阅读

  • 大家都在看
  • 小编推荐
  • 猜你喜欢
  •