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  英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上Hello,dverybody.TodayIwanttotalkaboutastoryofmine.Someboydodysay,thestoryareveryfunny.ButIdon'tthinkso...Ok.Le

  英语课前三分钟演讲稿改错

  我的英语演讲稿..帮我看看有没有错的..还有几个单词也帮我补上

  Hello,dverybody.TodayIwanttotalkaboutastoryofmine.Someboydodysay,thestoryareveryfunny.ButIdon'tthinkso...Ok.Let'sbegin

  Oneday,theskyareblack.AndIwasonmywayhome.suddenly,ahotgirlcomealong.Andshestoodbesideme.Shesay,"Areyouhandsome?'Whithouthesitation,Isay"no".Thethegirlgetangryandgeimeabig耳光.Shesay"noYou骗人"shecriedandwetaway.

  Afterthegirlwentaway,Tdidn'tmoveathinkamoment.MabeIam

  ...

  不会结尾了..还有些单词...

  语法错误改改啊~有分++++

  我表现的是个笑话...

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2020-02-06 20:45
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刘凤龙

  Hello,everyone.TodayIwanttotalkaboutastoryofmine.Someboydodysay,thestoryisveryfunny.ButIdon'tthinkso...Ok.Let'sbegin

  Oneday,itwasverydarkoutside(此处用black不太合适).AndIwasonmywayhome.Suddenly,aspicygirlcamealong.Andshestoodbesidemeandsaid:"Areyouhandsome?'Whithouthesitation,Isaid"No".Thenthegirlgotangryandgavemeabigslaponmyface.Shesaid"No!Youarelying"shecriedandwentaway.

  Afterthegirlwentaway,Ididn'tmovebutthoughtforamoment.MabeIam

  ...

  后面不知道你想表达什么了,你先把故事说完再说

  对了,提醒你一下注意时态的运用

2020-02-06 20:47:34

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