帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误HelloKittyisaverycutecat.HerbirthdayisNovember1st.Sheisopenandclear.Shealwayswearsasmileonherfaceandlookshappy.Shealwayswearsaprettysmallbutterflybow.hecanplaytennisandthe
帮我看一下这篇文章有没有错误
HelloKittyisaverycutecat.HerbirthdayisNovember1st.Sheisopenandclear.Shealwayswearsasmileonherfaceandlookshappy.Shealwayswearsaprettysmallbutterflybow.hecanplaytennisandthepianoverywell.HerfavoritesubjectsareEnglishandmusic.Shewantstobeapoetoramusician.TherearesixpeopleinKitty’sfamily:herparents,hergrandparentsandhersisterMimmy.MimmyisKitty’stwinsister.Mimmyisaquietgirl.
IthinkKittyisaverycutecat.I’mverylikeHelloKitty.
这是我英语课前演讲要用的,自己写的,看看有没有错误.