希望英语达人帮忙修改一下我写的一段很短的演讲稿吧急!Goodafternoon,ladiesandgentlemen.TodayIwillgivethespeechaboutmyfavouratemusic.Allovertheworldpeoplelistentothemusic,andeverybodyhastastefordifferent
希望英语达人帮忙修改一下我写的一段很短的演讲稿吧急!
Goodafternoon,ladiesandgentlemen.TodayIwillgivethespeechaboutmyfavouratemusic.Allovertheworldpeoplelistentothemusic,andeverybodyhastastefordifferenttypesofmusic.IloveJazz.JazzoriginatedfromBlues,anditisakindoffolkmusiccreatedbyslaveswhousedtoliveintheSouthAfrica.IreallylikeasingercalledOnoLisa,sheisthequeenofBossaNova.[放音乐]Thesong'snameisLaVieEnRose,it'sabeautifulandgentlesong,WhenLisastartssinging,Ialwayscan'thelpclosingmyeyesandsingingalong.[音乐完毕]OnoLisaisagreatsinger,Ibelieveshewillcreatmorebeautifulsongsforus.That'sall,thankyou!
明天就要课前演讲啦主讲自己喜欢的音乐类型和歌曲以及歌手大概两分钟以内希望大家帮我看一看不用客气的修改一下
如果里面有语法问题或者语句表达不清晰的也请帮我修改一下吧
而且中间有可以添加充实内容的地方还是请帮再我加一点吧
谢谢各位英语达人啦!^_^