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  写了篇英语作文~NewYeariscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgrades.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.Sheisgoingtota

  写了篇英语作文~

  NewYeariscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgrades.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.SheisgoingtotakeChineselessonseverySunday.Andsheisalittlebitheavy.Sosheisgoingtoeatmorevegetablesanddomoreexercisetokeepfit.Vickyisasmartgirl.ShedoeswellinEnglish.Nextyear,sheisgoingtolearnaforeignlauguage.SheisgoingtohaveFenchclasseseverymonth.Sheisgoodatplayingthepiano.Shereallylovemusicandsheisgoingtolearntheguitar.Shewantstobeamusicianwhenshegrowsup.Ihopethattheirdreamscometrue.

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  明天要课前演讲,麻烦看下有没有写错的地方~或者修改下~

  NewYear’sdayiscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgradesatschool.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.SheisgoingtotakeChineselessonseverySunday.Sheisgoingtobeareporterwhenshegrowsup.Sheisalittlebitheavy.Soshewilleatmorevegetablesanddomoreexercisetokeepfit.Vickyisasmartgirl.ShedoeswellinEnglish.Nextyear,sheplanstolearnaforeignlauguage.SheisgoingtohaveFenchclasseseverymonth.Sheisgoodatplayingthepiano,too.Shereallylovemusicandsheisgoingtolearntheguitar.Ihopethattheirdreamscometrue.修改版~

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2020-02-07 02:06
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  不错,但isgoingto用得太多,可改用一些其它生字,如will,intend,plan,want.等

  NewYear’sdayiscoming.EveryonehaslotsofNewyear’sresolutions.IaskedmyfriendsabouttheirNewYear’sresolutions.Lucyisagoodstudent.Shealwaysgetsgoodgradesatschool.ButshewantstodobetterinChinese.SheisgoingtotakeChinesecourseseverySunday.Herdreamisbeareporterwhenshegrowsup.Sheisalittlebitfat.Sosheintendtoeatmorevegetablesanddomoreexercisetokeepfit.Vickyisasmartgirl.ShedoeswellinEnglish.Nextyear,shewantstolearnaforeignlauguage.Frenchisherfirstchoice.Sheisgoodatplayingthepiano,too.Shereallylovemusicandsheisgoingtolearntheguitartoo.Ihopealltheirdreamscometrue.

2020-02-07 02:07:27

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