Yetitdidnotseemtoherthathewasevenslightlymad;

　　然而在她看来,他根本就没有疯.

　　（这是个主语从句,it放句首作形式主语,真正的主语是thathewasevenslightlymad）

　　butratherthatpeoplewhowerenotasosessedasshewaswiththeinchoateworldmirroredinthenewspaperswerealloutoftouchwithanawfulnecessity.

　　只是那些人不像她一样痴迷报纸里所影射的未成熟的世界,他们没有接触过这样一种偏执.

　　（这复合句我分层来说吧,butratherthatpeoplewerealloutoftouchwithanawfulnecessity,这一句是主干.

　　whowerenotasosessedasshewaswiththeinchoateworldmirroredinthenewspapers这部分属于定语从句,解释说明people,其中的主干是whowerenotosessedwiththeinchoateworld.

　　as…as…好理解的吧,引导状语从句,

　　theinchoateworldmirroredinthenewspapers这句呢,是mirror的分词结构作后置定语,定义theinchoateworld）

　　句子我喜欢意译,有时不清楚上下文环境难免译错,成分我应该说清楚了,要是楼楼觉得翻译不对可以尝试自己直译后重新组句哦!