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　　Aningterestingtrip

　　IhavebeentomanyinterestingplacesinYiwu,butIhavenotbeentomanyotherpartsofChinayet.LastmonthIwenttotheWestLakewhereisafamousscenicspotinHangzhouwithmyfamilybybus.

　　Thesceneryaroundthelakewasverybeautiful.Thereweremanytalltreesandbeautifulflowers.Somepeoplewerewalkingaroundthelakeandsomepeoplewereboatingonthelake.Weplayednearthelakeandenjoyedthebeautifulscenery.Eachofuslostourselvesinthebeautifulscenery.Suddenlyitrained.Weranintherainandwewereallwet.Butwewereveryhappy.Afterawhiletherainstopped.Theskybecameverycolourful.“Howbeautifulitis!”Isaidtomyself.

　　Intheafternoonwewentbackhomebytrain.Mytripseemedveryshort,butmymemoryofthepleasanttripwilllastlong.