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  研究生面试英语自我介绍,已完成,求修改!采用者另加50分!如题,希望能改正:1.错误的地方2.不够生动的地方.习惯用法什么的.——————————————————————Goodmorning,myrespe

  研究生面试英语自我介绍,已完成,求修改!采用者另加50分!

  如题,希望能改正:

  1.错误的地方

  2.不够生动的地方.习惯用法什么的.

  ——————————————————————

  Goodmorning,myrespectedprofessors!Itismyhonortobehereforyourinterview.First,letmeintroducemyselftoyou.MynameisZhangjing,22yearsold,IcomefromLuoyangcity,itisafamoustouristcity.IwillfinishmyundergraduateeducationinLuoyangInstituteofTechnologythisJune.Now,IamdoingmybesttoobtainingachancetoattendNanjingUniversityofArchitectureandTechnology.

  Inthepast4years,mostmytimehasbeenspentonstudyorcampusactivities.ButIalsousedvacationtimetosomedecoratingcompaniesdoinginternships.IamahardworkingstudentespeciallydothethingIaminterestedin.Iwilltrymybesttofinishitnomatterhowdifficultitis.WhenIwassophomore,IfoundEnvironmentalArtDesignveryinteresting,soIlearneditveryhard.Atthattime,themaindirectionisdoingsomethingabouttheinteriordesign.Suchascommercialspace,homedecorationandsoon.

  Astomycharacters,Idon’twanttouseanybeautifulwordtopraisemyself.Justlikemyfather,Istrivetobeanhonest,uprightandmodestman.Inmysparetime,Ilikefootball,tabletennisandChinesechess.AlsoEnglishsongsandmoviesaremyfavorite.

  ‘Lifeislikeaboxofchocolates.Youneverknowwhatyou'regonnaget’.However,IalwaysbelieveIshouldcherishmytime,andsenseanychangeforself-development,Itriedtohaveagoodprospect.

  Diligenceisthemotherofsuccess,Efficiencyistheonlyway.

  Thatisallformyself-introduction,Thankyouforgivingmethisopportunity!Thankyou!

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2020-02-20 23:21
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  第六行:mostmytime改为mostofmytime,紧接着"ButIalsousedvacationtimetosomedecoratingcompaniesdoinginternships."改为ButIalsointernedduringvocationinsomedecoratingcompanies.

  倒数第四行”senseanychange“最好改为seizeanychances.紧接着过去式应改为现在完成式:Ihavetriedto……

  总体还不错.

  Goodlucktoyou.Hopeyouwillbesuccessful.

2020-02-20 23:22:56

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