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　　Hello,mynameisXXX,asophomorestudentfromcommunicationdepartment,learning（majoringin比较好,主修）communicationtechnology.Inmyfirstyearinthisschool(我猜你是大学生吧?最好用oncampus或inthiscollege),Itookpartinmanyactivities,likestudentunion,dancinggroup,beingacompere（这个词美国人不用诶.还是用host或者moderator吧～）inourfaculty….IliveinWuhan,abeautifulcity.

　　(武汉有东湖,磨山,高校聚集,我最喜欢东湖,因为它风景优美,我可以在湖边散步,放风筝)

　　接上文wheretheEastLakeandMountMofillinasscenicspottogetherwithmanycollegesconcentratedinthemetropolis.MyfavoriteplaceistheEastLake,becauseit'sbeautifulandicanjustwalkandplaykitesontheriverside.

　　平时我喜欢游泳,看书,打羽毛球和看美剧.《生活大爆炸》不错,讲述的是两个物理天才和一群朋友的生活故事,很搞笑.

　　Inmysparetime,ilikeswimming,reading,playingbadmintonandwatchingamericanTVseries.Ifind"BigBangTheorie"notbadwhichtellsthestoryamongtwogeniusesforPhysicsandabunchoffriends.It'shilarious.

　　对于美国,我想我喜欢纽约,很想去迪士尼乐园游玩.我所了解的美国,是个开放,民主,各国人民聚集的地方,因此在美国能接触到各种各样的文化.

　　SpeakingofAmerica,ilikeNewYorkalotandreallywanttogototheDysneyLandforatour.America,inmymind,isameltingpotwhichisfilledwithopenness,democracyanddifferentracesofpeople.Thusit'seasytogetintouchwithdiverseculturethere.

　　对于工作,我很看重态度与合作精神,我相信任何事情只要自己肯努力就没有做不好的,任何事情只要团结,力量就无穷大.

　　Asformyfuturejobandcareer,iattachgreatimportancetoattitudeandTeamgeist.I'mconvincedthataslongasonemakeseffort,there'snothingimpossible.Anyproblemcanbeeasilysolvedwhenweworkasateam.

　　学生会和班委的工作让我了解到作为组织者的不易,同时也锻炼了我,让我变得更加自信,开朗,也积累了不少工作经验.因为主持,我知道了如何去更好的表达自己.

　　Inmycollegelife,icollectedsomeexperiencesasamemberintheStudents'Unionandasaleaderinmyclass.Thoseexperiencesactuallybenefitmeandmakemefeelmoreselfconfidentandoutgoing.ThankstotheseveraltimeswhenIhost,iknowhowtoexpressmyselfinabetterway.

　　希望对你有帮助,祝你成功!