这个可以吗?

　　Ifastudentdoesn'thaveenoughmoneytogotouniversity,theirparentscouldapproachtheirfriendsandrelativestoseeiftheycanborrowsomemoney.Whenthestudentgraduatestheycanpaythemoneyback.Inordertodecreasetheirparents'pressure,thestudentcouldapplyforascholarshipandcouldfindajobwhenatuniversity.Childrenshouldn'tcompletelyrelyontheirparentstoprovideeverythingforthem;theyshouldalsochooseapopularmajorwhichleadstoagoodjob!

　　如果孩子的家特别穷,根本没有钱让他们上学,父母可以向亲朋好友借钱,孩子工作后可以还给他们.为了减少父母的负担孩子应该争取得到奖学金并且可以去打工.依我看孩子不能完全靠父母,他们也应该选泽比较“火”的专业.