请会英语的高手,帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法或单词错误,有的话帮我改改..再帮我润色一下帮我把这段翻译一下并加进去：在上六年级的时候,我的父亲为了提高我的英语口语水平,让我

　　请会英语的高手,帮我看看这篇自我介绍有没有语法或单词错误,有的话帮我改改..再帮我润色一下

　　帮我把这段翻译一下并加进去：在上六年级的时候,我的父亲为了提高我的英语口语水平,让我每个星期六看一部外国英文的经典影片,我还记得我看的第一部影片,叫做《ET》我的这个习惯一直到现在都没有改变.

　　Helloeveryone!It'smyhonortointroducemyselftoyou.I'mWangSiyi,IcomefromZaozhuangTaierzhuang.Ihavespent12yearsinmylife.

　　I’mopenminded,easy-going,warmheartedwithasunshinesmile.Also,Imuchenjoymakingfriendsfromallwalksoflife..

　　I'mveryhappytotakepartinthiscompition.OfcourseI'malittlenervous.

　　Iwasgread3attheageof7.ThattimemyEnglishisveryverybad.Icouldn'tsayoutTwenty-sixEnglishletters.anditlastedGread5,afteranexam,myparentsaskedmetolearnmytestbooksofGread345,somyEnglishbecamebetter.Ifthisisnotthecase,Iwillnottakepartinthecompition.

　　Ipalydulcimeraboutfouryears,andILearningLatindanceaboutthreeyears.Ithinkit’soneofthemostbeautifulthingsallovertheword.

　　IadmiremanyEuropeandtheUnitedStatesstars,Forexamplejustinbieber,Avril,ladygaga.manypeopleisverySurprisedwhentheyheardilikeladygaga.theydon'tlikeherCostume.butidon'tthinkso.shehasherspecialstyle.Ilovehermusic.

　　Ilikereadingverymuch.MyfavoritewriterisjiangnanAndnowIamreadingabookcalledIkeepreadinghalfanhoureveryday.

　　ithinkenglishisthemostbeautifullanguagenotincludeChinese.Likeabiautifulsong.MydreamisgoingtobeaDiplomat.x05

　　Myspeechisover,Ihopeyouwilllikeme,thanks.

　　在14号下午四点之前给出，