【GRE作文求批改~我是一个小菜鸟~最近写了练了一篇作文,有很多不足,求各位大虾批评~Issue127Arefacts“stubbornthings”?Thespeakerassetsthatfactsare“stubbornthings”andsuggestmen’sincapabilityofchangi】

　　GRE作文求批改~

　　我是一个小菜鸟~最近写了练了一篇作文,有很多不足,求各位大虾批评~

　　Issue127Arefacts“stubbornthings”?

　　Thespeakerassetsthatfactsare“stubbornthings”andsuggestmen’sincapabilityofchangingthefactwithourwishes,inclinationsordedications.AndtoalimiteddegreeIagreewiththisassertionwhen“facts”refertophysicallawsorthemathematicformulas.Butinalargerextent,men’scapabilitycanactuallyaffectevenalterthose“stubbornthings”,inthefieldofengineeringandhistory,tonamejustafew.

　　Wegenerallyaccepttheideathatsomefactsarestubbornandevenourfondestwishesandearnestdedicationscannothelptochangealittle.ApotofwaterwillgetvaporizedinsteadoffrozeafterheatinglongenoughandcreateaforcesopowerfultoliftWatt’spotlid.ArippedapplewilldropfromtheappletreeinsteadoffloatintheairandhitonNewton’shead.EventheearthwelivecanbeeasilyliftedifwecouldfindArchimedesalong-enoughleverandastrong-enoughpivotpoint.

　　However,men’sabilitycanneverbejudgedbytheboundaryofthephysicallaws.Waterdoesrunfromahigherplacetoalowerplacebutweinventthepumptoredirectthewaterflowdirection.Lessprecipitationmayoccurintheswelteringsummerbutwemanagedtolaunchtherocketstohelptheraindropform.Gravitykeepsusonthegroundbutwedobuildthespaceshipsthattheyflysohighandsoproudthatmakehomesbeyondthestars.Iagreewiththeideathatphysicallawsareimpeccable,however,men’sendeavorhasatleastmanifestedapossibilitythatwecanlivebeyondthose“stubbornfacts”.

　　Yetperhapsthemoreappealingevidenceliesinthehistory.ItwasLincoln’sclaim“wearenotenemiesbutfriends”thatsawaseparatecountryonceagainunitedasindispensable.ItwasChurchill’s“blood,toil,sweat”thatwitnessedtheBritishEmpire’sdeterminationtocheckthesalvageanddeterminedassaultoftheGermany.“Whosaysthelastwordhadbeensaid?”wenowknowthatourhistoryisnotdestinedbutcanbeforged,thusproveoncemorethatwearethegenuinemasterofourown.

　　Iamloathtoend.DespitetheevidencethatsomefactsarestubbornwhichIpartlyagree,men’sreluctancetoacceptwhatis“stubbornandunchangeable”andwillingnesstoinnovateandexplorethefullpossi