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  【哪位高手能帮我修改一下这篇我刚写的英语作文?DearMikeI`mhappytobeabletowritetoyou,todayI`mgoingtointroduceaspecialplanttoyou-bamboo.Asyouknow,bambooisatallandthinplant,itlookslikeanhonestandelegant】

  哪位高手能帮我修改一下这篇我刚写的英语作文?

  DearMike

  I`mhappytobeabletowritetoyou,todayI`mgoingtointroduceaspecialplanttoyou-bamboo.

  Asyouknow,bambooisatallandthinplant,itlookslikeanhonestandelegantpeoplestanding(?)straightuponthegroundandit`sbeautifultohavemanylightgreenleavesinthehigherpartofitsbody,whichlookslikeaunfoldedumbrella,butthemostdistiguished(?)featureofitisthewhitecirclesinitsgreencane,it`sreallygoodtolookat,butwhatyoumightnotheardofisbamboohasaspecialmeaninginchineseculture,especiallyinacientchina,bambooisasymbolofloyalty,wiseandinnocent,ifachinesepraiseyouasabambooitprobabolymeansthatheorshethinksyouaretheoneswhodon`tcareaboutmoneyorsomethinglikethat,youhaveagoodcharacter,likeasageorsomething.therearealsoalotofpoepleinchinaliketosendbambooasgiftstotheirfriends.while,bambooasgiftshaveadifferentmeaning.itmeansthatpersonwhosendittoyouhopeyou`llgetahigherpositionor(get?)riseinyourrecentjob.

  It`sveryinteresting,isn`tit?well,honestly,therearemanydifferencesbetweenchineseansamericanculture,andI`dliketohearfromyouaboutsomeinterestingthingsinAmerica,wouldyoupleasetellmesome?

  bestwishes

  yourssincerely

  LiHua

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  第2行的beableto去掉,感觉有些重复第5行,people后加who下一行的ground后点句点,要不句子太长了,And~beautiful后改成thathas~下面的itsboddy改成itself下面的distiguished改成standing就行下面的lookat改成see比...

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