IcanclearlyrecalltheaccomplishmentIammostproudofinmylife.Inthepast,mygradeswereextremelypoorandthissaddenednotonlyme,butmyparentsaswell.[Lifeislikeaboxofchocolate,youneverknowwhatyouaregoingtoget.](不太懂这句想表达的.)Astimepassedby,Igraduallycametograspandrealizetheimportanceofgrades.Therefore,Idecidedtoconcentrateonmystudiesandjustgiveitmyall.TheprogressImadewiththejointeffortsofmylovingparentsandsupportiveteacherswasastounding.Fromthenon,lifebecameachallengethatIreadilyandhappilyaccept,filledwithhopeanddetermination.It'ssomethingItacklewithallmymightandlivetothefullest.Thisexperienceandsuccessfulchangewithinmyselfhastaughtmeinnumerouslessonsthatarecrucialtothemeaningoflife.Asaresult,Inowdomybesttoliveuptomyparent'sexpectationsandfulfillmydreams.

　　Didthisreallyfastsopleaseexcuseanytyposifthere'sany.追问ifyagotanyquestions,butIcan'tanswertonightsosorryboutthat.

　　Thankyousomuch,Icanappreciateit.ButIhaveaquestion.Didyoufindanymistakesinmyarticle?Thatsentencejustempressmychangesissudden.Soyouneverknowwhatyouaregoingtoget.

　　Mistakesinyourparagraph?Well...I'llbehonestwithyou.Therewereseveralmistakesinvocabandgrammar.Youtriedtoelaborateyoursentenceswithfancierwords,buttheyweren'tnecessarilyusedcorrectlyanddidn'tquiteconnectwithotherwords.Asforgrammar,therewereafewmistakesinpunctuation,butmosterrorswereinthesentenceitself.

　　Thatsentenceinbracketscanbetakenout,youdon'treallyneedit.