【求批改英语作文.Howisgoing?Ourteacherreadyourexceptionallywell-writtenessayyesterday.Whenit'sover,IknowIwasimpressedbyyourexceptionallywell-writtenessay.Ifeelitverybeautiful.Ibelievethateveryonecanfeelit.What'smor】

　　求批改英语作文.

　　Howisgoing?Ourteacherreadyourexceptionallywell-writtenessayyesterday.Whenit'sover,IknowIwasimpressedbyyourexceptionallywell-writtenessay.Ifeelitverybeautiful.Ibelievethateveryonecanfeelit.

　　What'smoreIhavelearnedlotsofthingsformMr.Fleagle'scommentsonhisessaysinceitover.Itcanbeseenasfollow.Ontheonehand,nopains,nogains.Mr.Fleaglehaverecognizedyourefforts.Ialsowork-hardinginthenexttime.IbelievethatIcandoit!Effortsmakesuccess!Ontheotherhand,Ilearnedsomethingabouthowtogetonwellwithmyfriends.Weshouldlearntosharewithothers.

　　I'mlookingforwardtoyourletterassoonaspossible

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　　点建议也行啊

　　语法错误来点新颖句子也行