一篇文章帮忙翻译（拒绝翻译器）Thefirstattemptofeventhemosttalentedartistsmusiciansandwritersisseldomamasterpiece.Ifyouconsideryourdraftsasdressrehearsals(彩排)ortryoutsrevisingwillseemanaturalpartoft
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Thefirstattemptofeventhemosttalentedartistsmusiciansandwritersisseldomamasterpiece.Ifyouconsideryourdraftsasdressrehearsals(彩排)ortryoutsrevisingwillseemanaturalpartofthewritingprocess.
Whatisthepurposeofthedressrehearsalsandtheout-of-townpreviewsthatmanyBroadwayshowsgothrough?Theanswerisaddingdeletingreplacingreorderinginotherwords
revising.AndrewLloydWebber'smusicalPhantomoftheOperaunderwentsuchaprocess.
WhenLloydWebberbeganwritingin1984hehadinmindafunnyexcitingproduction.HoweverwhenPhantomopenedinLondonin1986theaudiencesawamovingpsychologicallovestorysettomusic.Themusicalhadundergoneseveralrevisionsdueinparttoproblemswithcostumingandmakeup(戏服和化妆).ForinstanceLloydWebberrewrotesomeofthemusicbecausethePhantom'smakeuppreventedtheactorfromsingingcertainsounds.
Whenyoureviseyouchangeaspectsofyourworkinresponsetoyourevolvingpurposeortoincludefreshideasornewlydiscoveredinformation.
Revisionisnotjustanafterthoughtthatgetsonlyasmuchtimeasyouhaveattheendofanassignment.Moreoveritisamajorstageofthewritingprocessandwritersreviseeverystepoftheway.Evenyourdecisiontoswitchtopicswhileprewritingisatypeofrevising.However.don'tmakethemistakeofskippingtherevisionstagethatfollowstraining
.Alwaysmaketimetobecomeyourownaudienceandviewyourdressrehearsalsotospeak.Reviewingyourworkinthiswaycangiveyouvaluablenewideas.
Revisinginvolvesmixingtheeffectivenessandappropriatenessofallaspectsofyourwritingmakingyourpurposemoreclearlyandrefocusingordevelopingthefactsandideasyoupresent.Whenyoureviseaskyourselfthefollowingquestionskeepinginmindtheaudienceforwhomyouarewriting:Ismymainideaorpurposeclearthroughoutmydraft?DoIeverlosesightofmypurpose?HaveIgivenmyreadersalloftheinformationthatisfactsopinions
inferences--thattheyneedinordertounderstandmymainidea?FinallyhaveIincludedtoomanyunnecessarydetailsthatmayconfusereaders?