最近有个用英语讲故事的比赛,我准备的是寒号鸟的故事,这有篇寒号鸟的英语短文,希望大师们帮忙看看看看有没有错误,不妥的地方,就把不对的地方说说然后改过来Thereisanarticle"StoryofHan

　　最近有个用英语讲故事的比赛,我准备的是寒号鸟的故事,这有篇寒号鸟的英语短文,希望大师们帮忙看看

　　看看有没有错误,不妥的地方,就把不对的地方说说然后改过来

　　Thereisanarticle"StoryofHanHaoBird".Thebirdhasverybeautifulfeathers.Summer,HanHaobirdbodycoveredwithabrightfeatherslookverynice.HanHaobirdincrediblyproudtofeelthattheyarethemostbeautifulbirdunderthesun,andevenPhoenixcannotbecomparedwithitself.Andsoitalldayshakingthefeathers,everywhere,walkedupanddown,butalsotriumphantlysing:"PhoenixbetterthanPhoenixbetterthanme!"Summerpassed,andautumnarrives,thebirdshaveallopenedtheirbusy,theyflewtothesouthandsomebegantogohandinhand,readytospendawarmwinterthere;sometostayonthehardbusyday,accumulationoffood,repairWonest,makewinterpreparations.字数限制-