这个稍微短一点（对话）：

　　Thestoryofsnowwhite

　　Itisacoldwinterday.Ababy!HernameisSnowWhite.Sheisverybeautiful.Everybodylovesher.Theanimalsloveher,too.Thequeenlovesher.Butthequeendies.Anewqueencomes.Sheisbeautiful,butbad.

　　Children:SnowWhiteisbeautiful.

　　Queen:No,Iambeautiful.

　　Thisisamagicmirror.

　　Queen:Mirror,Mirror,whoisbeautiful?

　　Mirror:Notyou.SnowWhite.

　　Queen:No!No!No!KillSnowWhite!

　　SnowWhiteistakenfaraway.

　　SnowWhite:Helpme!Helpme!Please!Please!

　　Hunter:Allright.Go,SnowWhite!

　　TheanimalstakeSnowWhitetoalittlehouse.Shegoesinside.Thereare7littlechairs.Thereare7littlechairs!Sheisveryhungry.

　　The7dwarfscomehome.

　　Dwarf1:Whosathere?

　　Dwarf2:Whoatethis?

　　Dwarf3:Whodrankthis?

　　Dwarf4:Whoissleepinghere?

　　SnowWhiteissleeping.

　　Dwarf5:Look,sheissleeping.

　　Dwarf6:Sheisbeautiful.

　　Dwarf7:Lethersleep.

　　It’smorning.

　　SnowWhite:Hello!

　　Dwarfs:Whyareyouhere?What’syourname?

　　Shetellsherstory.

　　Dwarfs:Whatanevilqueen!

　　Dwarf1:I’llhelpyou.

　　Dwarf2:Me,too.

　　Dwarf3:Me,too.

　　Dwarf4:Staywithus!

　　Dwarf5:Yes.

　　Dwarf6:Yes.

　　Shestayswiththe7dwarfs.

　　Dwarfs:Thisisgood.Oh,whatfun!

　　SnowWhite:Let’scleanup.Bringtheplates.Washthem.Wipethem.Putthemaway.

　　Dwarfs:Let’sgo!SnowWhite,becareful!

　　Themagicmirror

　　Queen:Mirror!Mirror,whoisbeautiful?

　　Mirror:Notyou.SnowWhite.

　　Queen:What?I’llkillher!

　　SnowWhitewaitsathome.

　　Queen:Apples!Apples!Buysomeapples.Buysomeapples.Theyaredelicious.

　　Sheatethebadapple.

　　Queen:Ha!Ha!Ha!NowI’mthemostbeautiful.

　　Theycomehomeagain.

　　Dwarfs:Whathappened?Wakeup!Wakeup!

　　Queen:Mirror,mirror,now,whoisbeautiful?

　　Mirror:You!

　　Queen:Ha!Ha!Ha!

　　Dwarfs:PoorSnowWhite.Goodbye,SnowWhite.

　　Theprincecomes.

　　Dwarfs:Havedinnerwithus.PleasehelpSnowWhite.

　　TheytakehimtoSnowWhite.

　　Prince:Sheisbeautiful.Iwanttomarryher.

　　Dwarfs:Butyoucan’t.sheisdead.

　　Heprays.Thepoisonapplecomesout.

　　SnowWhite:Whathappened?Hello!

　　Everybodyishappy.

　　Prince:Marryme,SnowWhite.

　　Queen:Mirror,mirror,whoisbeautiful?

　　Mirror:Notyou.SnowWhite.

　　Queen:No!No!Themirrorbreaks.

　　Prince&SnowWhite:Goodbye!Thankyou!Thankyou!

　　Theylivehappilyeverafter.

　　这个是概括：

　　Alongtimeago,achildwasborntoaqueenandkingandshewascalledSnowWhite.Whenthequeendied,thekingmarriedagain.ThisnewqueenwaswickedandhatedSnowwhite.ThequeengaveordersthatSnowWhitewastobetreatedasaservant.

　　SnowWhitegrewverybeautifulandonedayaPrinceridingby,sawheratworkandfellinlovewithher.

　　Thequeenwasbeautifultoo,andeverydaysheaskedherMagicMirror,"Whoisthefairestintheland?"andthemirroralwaysanswered,"Youarethefaires

　　可是缩写没有是对话的呀，你写的为什么有呢？？？？？

　　因为这个写的是：白雪公主，七个小矮人，王后，王子等之间的对话，只不过是缩写。

　　可我们老师说缩写不能有对话，但是你写的还是不错的！