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  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.

  增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词.

  删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

  修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

  注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

  2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

  Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,Ihadthedreamofbecomingateachersincemychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmakeprogresses.Thereisnodoubtwhetherteachersplayanimportantroleinchildrengrowth.Notonlydoteacherspassonknowledgeforchildren,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethemselves.Comparingwithotherjobs,teachingishardandthepayislower.Andtome,whatgreatfunitistobewithchildren!TheymakemetofeelyoungforeverbecauseI'llstudyharderandtrymybesttorealizemydream.

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  Mydreamistobecomeaschoolteacherinthefuture.Infact,I∧hadthedreamofbecomingateachersinc

  have

  emychildhood.Inmyopinion,withoutteachers,nosocietycouldmake progresses.Thereisnodoubt whe

  progress that

  ther teachersplayanimportantrolein children growth.Notonlydoteacherspassonknowledge for childre

  children's to

  n,buttheyalsoteachchildrenhowtobehavethemselves.Comparing withotherjobs,teachingis hard andt

  Compared harder

  hepayislower.And tome,whatgreatfunitisto bewithchildren!Theymakemetofeelyoungforever bec

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  ause I'll study harder andtry my best to realize my dream.

  so

  解析:

  1.had前加have.考查时态.根据时间状语sincemychildhood 可知主句用现在完成时态,所以用havedone.

  2.progresses-progress.考查名词.progress 是不可数名词,所以去掉es.

  3.whether-that.考查引导词.Thereisnodoubt 表示"毫无疑问",是肯定,所以用that引导的名词性从句,Thereissomedoubt表示"有疑问"之后用whether引导的名词性从句.

  4.children-children's.考查名词所有格.修饰growth用children's 表示孩子们的成长.

  5.for-to.考查介词.passonknowledgetochildren表示传递知识给孩子们.

  6.comparing-compared.考查非谓语动词.在Comparing withotherjobs,teachingis hard andthepayislower中Comparing和teaching是被动关系,所以用compared.

  7.hard-harder.考查比较级.根据后句thepayislower 的比较级,所以前句teachingis hard 也需要比较级.

  8.And-But.考查连词.teachingis hard andthepayislower和whatgreatfunitis to bewithchildren!是转折关系,所以用But.

  9.to去掉.考查非谓语动词. makesbdosth表示"让某人做某事",所以用Theymakeme feelyoungforever

  10.because-so.考查连词.Theymakemetofeelyoungforever 是原因,I'll study harder andtry my best to realize my dream是结果,所以用so连接两句.

2020-02-29 06:03:33

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