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  【希望英语的高手帮我修改一下这个剧本~很短的!ThefriendshipisboundlessACT1(TodayisHalloweenday.Somonstersfromallovertheworldgatheredinthevampire’scastle.Ahumanscientistcometotheparty.Andthestorybeginwith】

  希望英语的高手帮我修改一下这个剧本~很短的!

  Thefriendshipisboundless

  ACT1

  (TodayisHalloweenday.Somonstersfromallovertheworldgatheredinthevampire’scastle.Ahumanscientistcometotheparty.Andthestorybeginwith……)

  Genie(scientist):Hello,everyone.I’mageniefromRICEUNIVERSITY,USA.Iwanttobecomeyournewfriend!(Infact,thegenieisahumanscientist.Thescientistwanttoresearchthesemonsters,soshecomestothisparty.)

  Shrek:I’msohappybecomeyournewfriends.I’mShrek.Ithinkyoumaybeknowme.I'mafamousmonster!Thechildrenaroundtheworldwouldlikemeverymuch!

  Genie:Myneighbor……uhno..mysisterlikeyouverymuch!

  Witch:I’mawitch.Anuglybutwarm-heartedwitch.I’mveryinterestedineverythingaboutthiscastle?Whataboutyou,newguy?Nicetomeetyou!

  Genies:You‘recurious.ButI’mgladtomeetyou!

  Mummy:I’mamummy.I’malittleshy.ButI’mveryhappytomeetyou,guy!

  Vampire:Ithinkyouknowme.MynameisDRACULA.Thiscastleismine.

  Genie:Youarefamousallovertheworld!I’mveryhonoredtomeetyou!Ithinkyouareverycool!

  Vampire:Thankyou.Nowlet’sgotothedining-hall.Ihavepreparedsomedeliciousfood.

  (Thevampireinvitedthesemonsterstohisdining-hall,theygothroughastraightlongcorridorwhichwasverysomber.)

  THEENDOFACT1.

  Act2.

  (Totheirsurprise,theendofthissombercorridorisabigluxuriousdining-hall.Themonsterssitbesidethedinnertable.Thenthewitchbeganatopicabouthuman.)

  Witch:Thisyear,manypeopleintrudeuponmyhouse.Morethanlastyears!Theywanttocatchmetodosomeresearch.Howfoolishandselfishthehumanis!

  Mummy:I’msosorrytohearit.我也好不到哪里去.EverytimeIgooutandwanttoplaywithhuman,theywereallrunningaway.Anditjustbecauseofmystrangelookandthesestrangebandage.

  Genie:Areyoureallydon’tlikehuman?(Thescientistisguilty.)

  Vampire:Yes!Iusedtodrinkwatermelonjuice,buthumanalwaysthinkthatI’mdrinkingblood!It’sirritatedme!SoIdesidedtodrinkorangejuice..

  Shrek:Ihatehumantoo.Theyalwayslaughatme.Thoughtheirchildrenalllikeme,theyalsothinkI’mj

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  Shrek:I’msohappybecomeyournewfriend【s】删除

  Thechildren【all】aroundtheworld【would】删除likeme

  verymuch!

  I’m【删】interestedineverythingaboutthiscastleverymuch【?】为什么是问号

  Whataboutyou,new【guy】多数指男人,小伙子?建议newguy改成prettylady==b我看到后面发现原来她在假扮.你随意吧可以不改,也可以改成newfriend

  【You‘recurious.!ButI’mgladtomeetyou!】Nice2meetutoo!U'rsuchacuriouswitch.

  【guy】都换成lady吧

  【Ithinkyouknowme】Dourememberme?

  Thevampire[invited]虽然没错但是我大概会用leadthesemonsterstohisdining-hall,theygothroughastraightlongcorridorwhich【was】is旁白不用过去式吧verysomber

  (Totheirsurprise,theendofthissombercorridorisabigluxuriousdining-hall【withmagnificentlightsblazing.】

  Themonsterssit【beside】aroundthedinnertable

  .我也好不到哪里去i'mnobetterthanu

  Yes!不喜欢应该说No!

  It【’s】删irritatedme!

  theyalsothinkI’mjustanuglymonsterwhowillmaketheirchildtomonster【too】删!

  Idon’tlikehuman【too】either

  【dissimulation】hypocritical

  Thescientist’sheart【is】fullwithcontradiction

  【thegenie】Sheleft/leaveswithembarrassment.

  【Don't】youthinksheisalittlestrange?

  【maybesheisreallyfeelnotgood!】She'sjustnotfeelinggood

  【Butwhyshedon’tappearenow?】Butsheshouldappearebynow

  -----------------------------------------------------

  我不太清楚剧本格式,写出来有点像shortstory:p

  xxxiswalkingtowardsthemwithalatterinhishand

  hisfacelookspuzzled.Hesighedwithdisappointmentandsaid"Ifoundthisletter,Gleftitonthetableofherroom,maybeweshouldcallherDrTancredi"

  "What!"theirvoiceismixedwithangerandfear"AHUMAN!"

  xxxx"Pleasetellmethisisajoke."

  “i'mafraideitisn't."

  W"whatdidshesayintheletter?"ShandsoverthethelettertoW

  Letterpassingaround,everybodyreadscarefully.

  "DearMonsterFriends

  I'msorrytoleavesuchawonderfullpartywithoutanotice,buti'mnotbraveenoughtosaygoodbyetoyourfacetoface.

  Ihadafuneveninglastnight,it'ssurprisinghowgentelyouare.Whenihearedyoursuffering,andthemisunderstandingofhumansocietytoyou,ifeelterriblysorry.Wehavealwaysbeentoldtogivecredittoadisagreeableormalevolentperson.

  Ithinkweshouldgivecredittoalldisagreeablecreatures,includingthemonsters,knowingaswedidhowintelligent

  andendearingyouare.

  如果是我就不写会帮他们保守秘密,而是写会致力于解除人类和怪物的误解

2020-03-01 01:47:10

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