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　　谁来帮我检查一下我英语的值日生报告?

　　Hello,class!I`mXXX.I`mveryhappybecauseShenzhou7camebacksuccessfulafewweeksago.Iwanttogototheuniversetoseethemoon.Butthedreamcan`tcometure.

　　IhavereadNarniarecently.TherearesevenbookslikeHarry.Po-

　　tter.ButlotsofpeoplethinkJ.K.RowlingcopiedNarnia.Becau-

　　sethebooksolderthanJ.K.Rowling.However,Istilllovethem.

　　That`sall.thanks!

　　主要是看看有没有什么语法.时态等的错误,