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帮我改改英语作文,英语很差劲的,看语法什么错误的,有好心人能提供长期修改的请留下邮箱或者什
Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfolllowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.
1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立,父母应该……
HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?
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Innowdays,preparedtheallthingandmadeadecideforchildrenisoverparents.Theactivitiesbeyondparentsshoulddoresultinchildrenlackofthedecideforthemselves.
Inordertomakechildrentobeindependent,parentsshouldtrytolettheyaloneandmuchthinkofwhattheythink.Askwhattheywantandtellchildrentoworkinghardforitinyourguide.
Parentsarethespecialteacherinchildlifebutnotthemselves.Everyonehaveabroadskyinlifeandcanflyinginthesky.Independentshouldbeinchildflyingtravel.
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