检查一下下面英文是否正确如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,-查字典问答网
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  检查一下下面英文是否正确如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,请指出并改正,(最好说明理由),注意每个细节都要,像大小写啊,符号啊,之类的都要哦~(最后并推断一下这是几岁的人写的,thank

  检查一下下面英文是否正确

  如果有语法错误,单词拼错或其他错误,请指出并改正,(最好说明理由),注意每个细节都要,像大小写啊,符号啊,之类的都要哦~(最后并推断一下这是几岁的人写的,thanks)(最后会给分的!)

  Ireallyhappywearefriendsnow.Youaresofriendly,makemesohappy!AndIhopeyoucanfeelmefriendlytoyou,too.YouaremyonlyfriendinAmerica.SoIamboundtotreasureourfriendship.IthingmyEnglishsobad,butIthroughyou,myEnglishisbetternow.Thankyouvery!AreyouokeyinAmerica?Andyourfamily.Ihaveawish,namelywecanmeet!Lookforward!It'sSpringFestivalinchinanow.Weareallveryhappy.DoyouknowaboutSpringFestival?Letmetellyou.TheSpringFestivalisChinesetraditionfestival.Instreet,everywherearehangredlanterns.Allpeoplewillhavea"famillyreuniondinner".Theymakemanydeliciousfood,dumplingsforthis"familyreuniondinner".Allchildrencangetsomeredpaperpacketcontainingmoneyasagift.Sotheyareveryhappy.ThisisSpringFestival.Doyoulike?Iloverock.AndmybestsingerisAvrilLavigne.Ithinksheissocool.Andhervoiceisveryspecial.Doyoulikeher?What'tyourfavoritesuperstar?Onweekend,Ilearntheguitar.Butmusicjustmyhobby.Mydreamisstudyabroad.ThengototheUSA.So,Iwillmakeefforts!What'syourdream?Iwanttoknowmoreaboutyou.Last,Ihopeyouandyourfamilyhappyeveryday!

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  第二句make前加and语气更顺.第三句me改my.SoIamboundtotreasureourfriendship是不是你打错了,IthingmyEnglishsobad改为IthinkmyEnglishissopoor.butIthroughyou,改为withyourhelp.Thankyou...

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